This is a special photo for me. In this picture I’m with my beloved pet. Its name is Anaís, I just gave her that name because it’s a sweet name and it was a tender little dog, so I thought it was proper to nicknamed it like that. This pic represents the love I feel for Anaís because it’s one of my loved ones. Especially because it’s has been by my side me since a year ago. Actually yesterday my loved puppy had its birthday, and I was very pleased to be with her a little longer in my life –or maybe I’m in her life a year more- She´s the sweetest thing on Earth and I think I couldn’t be the same person without her. In this picture I can feel the same exactly feeling when I was with her in person. Then when I see her photograph she’s in my heart and nobody can steal that moment from my life.
This is a special photo for me. In this picture I’m with my beloved pet. Its name is Anaís, SS I just gave her that name because it’s a sweet name and it was a tender little dog, so I thought it was proper to nicknamed WF it like that. This pic represents the love I feel for Anaís because it’s one of my loved ones. Especially because it’s (has) been by my side me since a year ago. Actually yesterday my λloved puppy had its birthday, and I was very pleased to be with her a little longer in my life –or maybe I’m in her life a year more- She´s the sweetest thing on Earth and I think I couldn’t be the same person without her. In this picture I can feel the same exactly feeling when I was with her in person ?M. Then when I see her photograph she’s in my heart and nobody can steal that moment from my life.
ResponderEliminarVery nice, Melissa! Great language. Your use of "it" to refer to your pet is OK, but usually you can use "he" or "she" since the pet is very close to you.